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Why Articles Get Edited

1. The publishing world has two types of written material: edited and unedited. The former is clear, correct, consistent, reliable and readable. Unedited copy usually isn’t. It tends to contain grammatical bloopers and errors of usage. It is usually wordy, vague, disorganized and repetitive.

2. All articles chosen to be run in our publications pass through two types of editing. The content of the articles is chopped by the various directorates to ensure technical accuracy. The articles are also edited by the staff in Code 70 for style and meaning. Some articles are edited quite heavily; in every case, the Code 70 staff can support their changes by citing the rules of grammar and syntax, or professional references on literary style.

3. Sometimes, technical experts who have not worked with professional editors do not understand the purpose of editorial changes. Perhaps they think everything is simply an arbitrary, happy-to-glad change, and that the result is a free-for-all of personal preference. Or they don’t recognize the vast difference between the conversational, colorful language of magazine journalism and the pedantic, bureaucratic language of manuals and instructions.

4. The Code 70 staff is not perfect; typos and misspelled words do get by us. Anyone who reads copy should mark these errors. If you think an editor has misinterpreted something an author said, feel free to explain your concern and suggest a correction. But please fight the urge to write "Use the original" when the original contains errors.

5. If you write an article, don't take offense when it gets edited. Even the most accomplished writers get edited, and most of them learn to enjoy the fact that their editors are helping them look better. Professional writers look upon editors in the same way that pro athletes look upon coaches: people who help them perform better, improve and excel. Our editors improve articles and make them easier to read. We want nothing less than well-written articles in our magazines. The Code 70 staff isn’t expert in aviation or surface operations or maintenance. We depend on you for the technical accuracy of our articles. We are, however, expert when it comes to leads, transitions, sentence and paragraph structure, tone, vocabulary and style.

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